sorry for the long time it took. I wasn't intending to take that long in fact this page was suppose to be submitted last Thursday unfortunately the file got corrupted in the last second.
Also on the side note .as much as I love to draw Large Ears, I have decided to change Ayami's design a little
I think u did ayami's facial expressions really well in this page^_^ and I like the slight hair change you did.....when I first saw Ayami I thought "hmm.....she looks a little different."..and when i read your comment I found out what it was.
However to give u some tips on the grammar..when nadu says "seems that i made in time"...it should be " seems that I made it in time"
also..the bad guy when he says "form" should be "from"....I'm surely you can easily fix these things..
can't wait for the next page. ^_^
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I really like this page ^^ woo, don't mess with Nadu!
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However to give u some tips on the grammar..when nadu says "seems that i made in time"...it should be " seems that I made it in time"
also..the bad guy when he says "form" should be "from"....I'm surely you can easily fix these things..
can't wait for the next page. ^_^
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sorry I was half a sleep when I was working on the page and I wanted to finish it ASAP
thanks for ponting them out though. I have just fixed them with Mx Paint
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"It's stupid to let a fool kiss you, it's worse to let a kiss fool you."
come check out my gallery[link]
~Higurashi-FanClub
~lucky-XIII
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